Sitting on the wam yellow sand just relaxing to the soft music on my ipod, eating the best spicy ahi bowl to fill my stomach up. As my mind goes blank its wide open for everything and anything i don't have to be afraid to be myself anymore. No one to impress, no one can judge. It just me. My pain and tears just suddenly don't exist anymore. It was just me and the beach nothing can stop me from doing anything. As i lay down with my face up to the sun and the nice cool breeze just kiss my cheek, my mind starts to wonder to a different place. For once i don't have to be scared about zoning out because i know that it is okay.
After my body starts to heat up from the bright sun my mind starts to wonder back. I sit up sweating from the heat. As i across the sand my feet start to touch the moister in the sand. My body just takes a moment and just think about the small things that's going on around me. Little kids learning how to swim friends laughing and surfers catching waves. Walking deeper and deeper in to the nice cool water i dip my head in and see the fish just swimming around me i smile. The fish in the water just swim around not giving a care in the world all they do is swim and eat nothing to worry about because they know they don't have any worries. It gets me thinking that i should be like that to. I should be like a fish. Stop worrying about everything and just think about what's going on right now.
To sum everything up far away beaches is my special place. It makes me feel undefeated and it's a place where i can fit in. A place where i know everything is right. No thought no stress just you and the water. It's something in life i can appreciate and make me feel astonish.
To sum everything up far away beaches is my special place. It makes me feel undefeated and it's a place where i can fit in. A place where i know everything is right. No thought no stress just you and the water. It's something in life i can appreciate and make me feel astonish.
WHY..WHY..WHY. WHY DOES HALIEWA(BE SPECIFIC ABOUT WHAT BEACH) HELP YOU FEEL SO FREE. WHY THIS PLACE IN COMPARISON TO EVERYWHERE ELSE OR EVERY OTHER BEACH. YOU NEED TO TELL US WHY YOU GO THERE WHAT MAKES YOU WANT TO GO TO THE BEACH. MS(3-)
ReplyDeleteI like how you put lots of sensory details. Explain why you like going to Haliewa and not the other beaches.
ReplyDeleteExplain more about that beach but good detail
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