Wednesday, February 5, 2014

I am just a coin REMAKE :3


You think you may know me
but i have two sides, i can be nice with a bit of anger  
I am also small 
but I change peoples' lives 
but remember i am a coin, with  heart 

If you use my sharp edges 
people need me for luck   
as i travel the world  
people leave me bye day 
someone new comes along 
its just a surprise
but you must remember i am just a coin  with a heart and excitement 
coming in different forms 
In my metal interior
Bronze, silver, copper, even gold
but me specifically I come in the color filipino  
with my small circular figure
 I carry values through life 
but you must remember i am just a coin with a heart, excitement, a culture 
people drop me everyday 
but someone new always comes along 
as a pocket becomes my new home 
it doesn't last long 
so come flip me over take your chance what could go wrong
but after all i am just a coin 


i am a coin with a heart that gives me life
a coin that gives me something to be exited about every day
a coin that is out going and takes chances

-MI

Thursday, January 30, 2014

I am just a coin

You think you may know me
but i have two sides 
I may be small 
but I change peoples lives 
but remember i am a coin
If you look past my sharp edges 
I carry history of our states 
as i travel the world 
changing peoples live 
someone new comes along 
its just a surprise
but you must remember i am just a coin 
coming in different forms 
in my metal interior
Bronze, silver, copper, even gold 
with my small circular figure
 i carry values through life 
but you must remember i am just a coin 
people drop me everyday 
but someone new always comes along 
as a pocket becomes my new home 
it doesn't last long 
so come flip me over take your chance what could go wrong
but remember i am just a coin

-MI

Saturday, January 25, 2014

Coney Island

A life is like a carnival. It's full of ups and downs and you have a certain amount of time to achieve your goals before time is up. "A Coney Island Life" by James L. Weil is a poem that compares life to a carnival. Life is like a roller coaster that keeps moving forward until it reaches a complete stop.
The poem states that " having lived a Coney Island life on a roller coaster of ups and downs". Having said that Coney Island is compared to life "roller coaster of ups and downs" is the achievements and dissapointments. The poem also states "seen my helium hopes break skyward without me". The helium hopes are like balloons. It's like watching your hopes and dreams drift away leaving you to the surface. The poem states that " now arms filled with dolls I threw so much more" It's saying that the dolls are like achievements that he has worked so harded for. Then he takes for granted thinking everything will come easily. The poem also states " I have to catch the brass - ring sun before the game is up". The brass - ring is like his goal he's trying to reach before he dies. Through the metaphors the poet compares Coney Island to life. Life is like a roller coaster that keeps moving forward until it reaches to a complete stop.

Friday, December 13, 2013

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