Honorable, True and fair, all similar to one thing. Honesty,
something so simple to do yet so many people have no control over. It’s like
man kind today don’t realize how their action they do in the present affect their
future. With the actions that were caused in Macbeth by William Shakespeare is
a perfect example how if you are not honest with yourself there is no coming
back, there is just no coming back to yourself.
Macbeth "What is we should fail?" (Act 1 scene 7) "Lady Macbeth " We fail? just tighten your courage until it was taut and we won't hail. When duncan is asleep-" (Act 1 scene 7) can clearly show that macbeth wasn't 100% for the killing he didn't really want it enough to do a deed that can affect so many futures. It was Lady Macbeth who wanted him to kill him she wanted to had a king for a husband and she would persuade to get that. THe crave something so difficult that they had to do the worst to get it
After killing the king Macbeth started to get paranoid feeling that people know that he has done so Macduff "I will take castle of Macduff by surprise. i will seize Macduff by surprise i will size Macduff's property in fire, put to the sword his wife, his children" (Act 4 scene 2) he thought that killing would make him feel better but it didn't it, it just made him feel worse and brought him into more trouble. Macduff didn't realize what he was doing even his wife everyone thought he was crazy didn't agree with all the killing that was being caused.
After all the running Macbeth has been doing trying to cover up all his tracks Macduff killed him. All of his deeds finally caught up with him and karma was able to get to him "life is but a walking shadow- a wretched actor who passes and rages for a short time on stage and then isa heard no more" (Act 5 scene 5 pg 21-24) Macbeth knew what was coming for him and yet he still suffered every consequence.
To conclude to this dramatic story honesty was the solution the whole him if macbeth was honest in the first place none of this would have happen if macbeth was honest to how he didn't want anything to happen to the kind everything would have been okay.
you need to expand your discussion throughout the entire essay. The introduction is highly confusing because not enough is stated. The first two sentences are worded awkwardly making it a confusing opening. And your thesis statement is confusing and need to explain more. Your evidence is very weak because it doesn't tell much at all. And you are also missing evidence (two per paragraph). You need to develop your discussion in the body paragraphs and make a deeper connection to theme. You tend to repeat ideas and/or state the obvious. Conclusion is also missing many key elements. AS(1+)
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